23 March 2012

Count of Monte Cristo Part II

As a director, I liked the humor and jokes that were placed cleverly in the movie. For example when the priest is dying, he says "When they asked about the map, I lied." Puzzled, Edmund asks "You lied?" The Priest's response to that was "I am a priest, not a saint." Another example is Jacapo's pledge to Edmund, "I swear to you on the souls of my dead brothers, and even the ones that aren't feeling to well, I am your man."
On the other hand I didn't care for the casting of Edmund's son. The actor seemed much too old for the character's age. I also didn't care for some of the plot holes. For example, how did Edmund get so sophisticated to be considered a high class person. I would imagine that being in prison for so long wouldn't give someone a high society attitude. Also, how did Edmund come to be a "count"? (because technically he isn't from birth. Doesn't it require documents, not just a fancy house?

As an author, I wouldn't change anything about the story. I love the way it was written. It has the perfect amount of drama and suspence without being gaudy and corny. There is also nothing I would avoid. The brutality of how one action sets off a chain of equal reactions, whether pleasent or not, shows the audience how they should be aware of what they do, and shouldn't just act without thinking of the consequences.

22 March 2012

Count of Monte Cristo

  • plot: Two men show up on a shore with a sick captain. One man, who lived in poverty is becomes the new ship captain as the late one passes. The man's fiancee marries his best friend after beleiving he was dead. The man finds treasure and becomes the count. He gets revenge by attempting to kill said friend. Ex-fiancee dies after being wounded by the fight. (the extremely short plot summary)
  • conflict: Mondago is jealous of Edmund, and sends him to prison at Chateau d'Eif. Edmund now hates Mondago.
  • setting : France
  • theme: Romance. Survival.
  • chracters: Edmund Dantes (who later becomes the Count), Fernand Mondago, Mercedes, Old man Dantes, Mssr. Villefort, Old man Villefort, Abbe Faria, Luigi, Jacopo

20 March 2012

Spring Break

Warning: I am NOT a writer. My grammar and spelling stink. For your grammar-nazis out there feel free to rant and rave all you want. It's not getting fixed.

Spring Break was SO boring, at least in my opinion. I was sick and all I could do was dreaded Spring Cleaning, read Harry Potter, and drew comicsupdating my Deviant Art in the process. 

I apologize for the poor quality of the picture. I have to use my phone. I will upload a WAAAAYYYY better one later.


On a side note I found out that bored + pair of scissors = BAD
I  cut my hair, freaking my mom out in the process (though if I do say so myself i thought it turned out pretty nice).
I hung out with a friend, and played Castlevania and Blaz Blue: Continum Shift
AND NOW..........

because its Cute! and I have nothing else to say. >_<